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Tiana Calthye
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 Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 12:55 pm Post subject: Chapter One (discuss!) |
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I've added a link in the archives to the beginning of chapter one, even though I don't have a chapter one graphic... http://betweenplaces.comicgenesis.com/archive.html ARCHIVE LINK, see, link to the start, lol...
It should end in... uhm... well... lemme think. Two or three weeks or so, I guess... 6-12 more pages, if it goes as it's going in my head.
SO FAR!
We've introduced:
-Dayun
-Gabruel
-Dreshae
-Shay
-Avante
-Mysada (kinda)
-Varden
And two settings.
The characters introduced in chapter one are going to be most of the cast, so don't worry. I'm just starting a thread to rant about what's up so far!
I HATE PAGE TWO.
With a passion.
UTMOST PASSION.
That is all.
I like the last couple pages, though. As indicated by my icon choice, I love that crop, it's so manically evil and gleeful. If I get time I'm going to redo those first two pages because they are UGLY. And I wonder if I can sneak in a chapter one graphic sometime. Like, a page graphic. Yeah. I don't want to use 'chapter whatever' as updates, though, because I think that's wimping out.
So far...
THE PLOT THICKENS DUNDUNDUNNN.
I know what's going to happen next so I'll just shut up now, I just feel like making threads to rant. ^_^
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AubinMagnus
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| Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 4:19 am Post subject: |
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It is, of course, very well done. And the random face is very cool. 
And, you know, don't freak out or agonize so much  |
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Tiana Calthye
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| Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 7:27 am Post subject: |
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(clutches head) The current page that was up took HOURS of my time. It may have only taken a few hours TECHNICALLY to do it but it was HOURS OF ANGST AND PROCRASTINATION AND FREAKING OUT ABOUT IT.
Gah.
But it's probably my best art so far. I spent hours trying to get it perfect.
I think... at my current level of ability... it is as good as I could get it.
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Naraiwë
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| Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 9:46 pm Post subject: |
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Meh, I don't understand whay you hate page two, I thought it was great. Both art-wise and starting-a-comic-wise.
The current page is, ofcourse, also great.
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| Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 3:47 am Post subject: |
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(hand over heart) I don't hate it THAT much, I just don't think artistically it was up to the best of my abilities. Gabriel looks...
...like he's pooping, actually.
That's why I hate it. XD The crop of Gabriel's face at the top.
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Lol, well, you know how it is, you always have problems with your own art. Heck, that's probably the main reason why I haven't got mine going yet, having to actually draw pre-decided things rather than whatever my mind feels like creating. I think you're doing fine, because _I_ didn't think "oh, he's pooping!" when I read that page.
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| Posted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 12:31 am Post subject: |
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Now. (kicks self) Go and ink the next page plz.
(has no buffer)
(brains)
But I have four pages. PENCILLED. Yeah, like that helps... snrk.
I know, it's quite difficult drawing predecided things like this. I'd almost drop it, but I'm only posting for my readers, of whom I have... maybe a couple... snrk. You guys don't say anything over there so I don't know if anyone's reading.
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| Posted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 7:00 pm Post subject: |
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I'm not much of a "comment on webcomics that I read person". But I do read it. 
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| Posted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 12:58 am Post subject: |
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Well, you keep posting here so that counts. You're still 'commenting' on it. But you're the only one indicating in any shape or form that you really are, you and J. But that's fine. I haven't advertised at alll.
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Exactly. And when it's been going for a bit longer I'm sure more people will actually find it.
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Well, I've started changing my signature on various forums to have an ad banner... and when I hit 15, 20 pages or so, I'm going to join a few top webcomic boards and the webcomic list. So you know, people might be able TO find it then.
Also trying to make friends on webcomic forums...
Also, in 30 minutes, it will update. DUN DUN DUNNNN.
I should probably finish Tuesday's page.
Before bed.
Myep.
Well, it DOES have pencils.
So does Thursday's, actually. And I think next Sunday's.
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^^ You should sleep more.
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| Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 7:41 pm Post subject: |
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Nah, I'm too genius when I'm half dead.
I just can't DO anything, usually.
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| Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 6:49 pm Post subject: |
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| Jeez, exlude me from your readership, I'm only #2 |
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| Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 7:08 am Post subject: |
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Hey, that post was a while ago. I didn't know you were following it. 
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| Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 8:22 am Post subject: |
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Nah, I'm only post #2 on this topic. Heh.
(Don't worry, I'm only joking!) |
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| Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 11:58 pm Post subject: |
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I know you posted on the topic before. That doesn't mean anything. I get a few more daily hits than before now.
Back on topic, there is an established end to chapter one coming up... in... uh... a couple weeks, I guess. I think I'll end up with about 32 pages for it. ^_^
Then I'm going to print them. Bwhahahaa.
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| Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 7:32 pm Post subject: |
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| Oooo! Oooo! Do I get a copy? Pweeeeeease? (I'll pay for it!) |
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| Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 11:26 pm Post subject: |
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Well, of course you do. Jeez. I'll be doing them through Ka-Blam and once it's ready I'll find out who all wants, I guess... though it should go up on IndyPlanet then so you guys can just buy yourself.
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| Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 7:32 am Post subject: |
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| I can't buy off the net, but I'll give you cash for a copy |
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Well, shipping is cheaper if I ship them to me and then give them to you guys IRL.
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| Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2008 10:51 am Post subject: |
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| Yay! *flail with glee* |
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